Not quite i wanted.....

Ok so i can't do color... yet! I think colors just don't suit my sketch -style drawing. But maybe in the future.
So i try to concentrate on line work little bit more... but the kind of comic style i want to do, need lot of practice too... shit.

So heres the first version of the line art. Inspired by none other than Mandy Morbid!!
Tell me what you think.